OK, the new scene framing rules worked much better (except for "why is your character in this scene?" I have to re-word that).
Conflict worked as designed, but the nature of the conflict has to be fleshed out better in the GM notes.
Christie made a cool character and she had almost no questions to ask me. I think that part is working out well.
I have to work on a better way to describe the Action types that affect Goal, Drawback, Purity and Corruption. I know it's a good mechanic, but I don't know how to evoke the right "feel" of it...
Still, good progress!